falling inside the abyss, the infinite darkness
to find the woman that death took her away
my dark goddess

"no one can harm us, no one can feel us
no one can touch us, no one can heal us"

she's isolated from the daylight, part of the underworld
surrounded by dark angels, fallen archangels
lost in space and time, marked with the evil sign
singing a lullaby that exorcise the light
so cursed and bittersweet, as the sky at night

downhere you rule, my love so cruel
with eyes so cold, like lunar jewels
"remember our past, so full of lust
'till death arrived, and turned me into dust"

reunion under damnation's spell
to see your face again
i sold my soul to the one who fell

your blasphemic divine figure stands proud
i can see your ravenous hair
dancing, to the rythm of tartarus' wind
while you're walking on seas of despair
enlightened with eternal restless moonlight

"no one can harm us", cursed by the light
"no one can feel us", blessed by the night
"no one can touch us", our shadows wandering
"no one can heal us", with darkness inside

my crusifixion upside down
sins of my life instead of the nails
undead in coffin under snowy ground
a boat with my soul away it sails

reunion under damnation's spell
to carress and kiss your soft pale skin again
my soul is tortured by the one who fell

"soulless both of us
living a dream, in a nightnare's scene
an embrace by the veil of the dark mist
joining unholy chanted rituals
and painted blood-red feast"

reunion under damnation's spell
to be forever, eternaly with you
i kneel in front of the one who fell

trying to found the salvation of our love
i fell to the void of the damnation of my soul
but i know that you're still with me
so i don't realy care

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The topic is old, but there arent really any "new" topics, whatever you choose, someone will have already written about it, sorry. Besides, people who put their works here just want to share it with others, i dont think the main idea is to be told how good/bad you are. There are professional critics who do that ;)
*no, not eveybody posts stuff here because they want to be "praised" for it
*many poets have used references to mythology before Dani :) and some of them were also inspired by others before them.
*you may have your own opinnion, your choice of words just reveals much about your personality. Words can destroy, but you could instead use them to encourage someone to continue and try harder. Yes, hes obviously a beginner, i hope he continues writing and finds his own style.


Johnny Wilde said:
no, people who share their poetry with others want to be praised for it .... why else would you do it?? and if you put it up here, you should expect people to talk about it ..... thats why this place is called the discussion forum..... someone writes something and everyone gives their opinions on it ... and i was giving mine .... i thought it was unoriginal and well cliched. and yeah i know every idea is regurgitated in some way or other, but thats no excuse to never try anything new right?? there are still people who write great poetry and dont just write plotless drivel about dark queens and unholy divine blashpemy or whatever .......... and some frankly embarrassing attempts to copy danis references to mythology ..
people trying to write like dani always bugs me .. none of you are ever gonna be as good, so it just looks like cheap and poor imitation rather than genuine creativity

Larve said:
The topic is old, but there arent really any "new" topics, whatever you choose, someone will have already written about it, sorry. Besides, people who put their works here just want to share it with others, i dont think the main idea is to be told how good/bad you are. There are professional critics who do that ;)
first of all i want to thank you guys and girls for reading my post.
i'm not a guy who wants to be praised, after all i don't think i deserve to be praised
i put a post which i wrote trying to capture fragments of the cradle feeling(dusk...era), i do not claimed originality.
so what more appropriate than some opinions of cradle fans about lyrics with cradle's aesthetic?
about the so called "bad" comments: i think that a comment who said "you've got to improve that thing" helps very much
there is no original artwork...........
every artwork has taken ideas from others, from other peoples ideas or thoughts, from stories and tales...........
even dani, who i personally believe is a great lyricist has taken ideas from other sources............
in my opinion original is something that comes out of your heart while thinking of some things...or listening to music........
when writing, drawing etc you have to feel and not think... thats original...........
and any new lyricist,poetrist etc really hasnt formed hes own "art making personallity",so his work is an "imitation" of something other............
personal style is like a tree.......it begins from a seed that someone else burried in the ground and as the time goes by it grows.............and is one the "tree" whether to grow tall and healthy or just be an other parasite feeding on others..........
and only with real care it can grow healthy..........
so dont blaim someone that has just started writing,drawing etc whether he is good or just one more nothing...........
criticise someone who has been writing for a long time...........
but if anyone criticise you never be bothered........
if you criticise youll get criticised............

and man...your lyrics are good for a start, except the last two lines........
i dont think they much.........
just keep writing and youll become better and better...........

after all none starts from the top of the ladder..........
Hello. Im am a solo guitarist and I'm composing some music.
I really liked your lyrics and I want to ask you If I can use it to a song made by me.
I will give you credits in the song and everywhere I play it in the future...

If it interests you, it is really in style of Cradle of Filth. :)

Thank you
this reminds me of when George Carlin said he was going to say something that no other human ears have ever heard before in the history of mankind.. "After i stick this hot poker up my ass, I'm going to chop my dick off!".. LOL you know why no one has ever heard that before, right because no one has ever fucking said that before...LOL..

Larve said:
The topic is old, but there arent really any "new" topics, whatever you choose, someone will have already written about it, sorry.
Cheers to that :D

Nadir Tiffauges said:
this reminds me of when George Carlin said he was going to say something that no other human ears have ever heard before in the history of mankind.. "After i stick this hot poker up my ass, I'm going to chop my dick off!".. LOL you know why no one has ever heard that before, right because no one has ever fucking said that before...LOL..

Larve said:
The topic is old, but there arent really any "new" topics, whatever you choose, someone will have already written about it, sorry.

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