Poetry Topic
For all of you who want to share your poetry, please post and discuss it here so its easier for everyone to find.
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Permalink Reply by Goddess_of_Darkness_Supreme on -
haha why thank you. o made some changes to it o improve it. so...
gabriel farias duarte said:It seems cool to me ^^.
SimplisticallyHereAlone said:Hey, i havent posted one in a while, so tell me what you think…
This knife in my hand
Looks all too grand.
Press the blade against mu skin.
Help me commit the ultimate sin.
Why did you cause me this pain?
Honestly, what did you have to gain?
Blood pours down my skin.
Oh, darkness, set in.
My blood is everywhere,
But you don’t care.
You tempted me with your body,
Made me feel like a somebody.
I took the bait,
And now darkness is my fate.
You took it all away.
Now I am forced back to the gray.
Press the blade deep,
Yet, you ignore my dying weep.
Rage and hurt fill me,
But you don’t see
The pain you cause.
Oh, someone get the gauze.
Look at what you’ve done.
The knife is now replaced with a gun.
Cool metal against my head,
Oh, how I long to be dead.
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Permalink Reply by Vladimyr Blaspheme on -
Bahamut
by Vlad Blaspheme
O serpent,
I swim in the seas of valor, to reach thy name and word.
Let these days pass as dying suns and oppress'd moons,
their lunar gaze lain upon the deadest Eden,
that there our serpent will rise again,
O Bahamut, snake that giveth me my throne,
let it be shone, that in us is the true kingdom,
if we wish to attain the splendor of freedom.
Ave Luciferi.
O dusk, break God to dust,
Break the skies,
and press upon the earth,
that we, the progeny of revenge shall inherit the mirth.
We hold the torch that blazes,
We shall hail not a god who has taken,
Our fire rages on,
Hail our Father, the great Satan,
Ave Belial,
In the blood of the christians,
we reign again,
to bring them the felt shame,
that had condemned thy sacred name,
O Serpent, diamond in the grain,
O Bahamut, Lion bearing the name,
We pray to thee,
in search of vengeance,
For we were so eager to please,
The god that left us to bleed,
We hold the angels in torment and fear,
that in their ransom we rise again,
powerful and just as long ago,
and leave Mary in her long deserved tears.
We see the void,
in all of God's word,
We are our own sermons,
and bow to no king nor spirit of tyranny,
for it is so absurd.
Rise,
for we hide in darkness,
awaiting our time,
for God to fall to our feet,
as bitter is he as mighty,
we gave Eve knowledge,
and Adam his children through "sin",
and he cursed us from Heaven,
O dark lord, our revenge will be sweet.
We swim in the seas of valor,
we submit naught to Christ,
for he will bask in defeat,
O basilisk of Aidenn,
we ask in somber tune,
to grant us thy magick,
that we may bring God his doom.
Ave Satanas.
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Permalink Reply by Kevin Hall on -
Whew, that would have taken a while, well thought out, structured ... peaked my interest. It's very brief (doesn't ramble on) for getting the topic across which is the point. Nice one!
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Permalink Reply by Vladimyr Blaspheme on
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thanks much. :) as you see I haven't posted a poem in a while, but I felt this one deserved the post considering I edited, and re-edited it. lol
Kevin Hall said:Whew, that would have taken a while, well thought out, structured ... peaked my interest. It's very brief (doesn't ramble on) for getting the topic across which is the point. Nice one!
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Permalink Reply by Kevin Hall on
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"Oh, someone get the gauze" ? Bit late for that, lol, but it works!
... I like it!
SimplisticallyHereAlone said:haha why thank you. o made some changes to it o improve it. so...
gabriel farias duarte said:It seems cool to me ^^.
SimplisticallyHereAlone said:Hey, i havent posted one in a while, so tell me what you think…
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Permalink Reply by Kevin Hall on
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Haha ... yea! .... I sorta noticed that :)
Vladimyr Blaspheme said:thanks much. :) as you see I haven't posted a poem in a while, but I felt this one deserved the post considering I edited, and re-edited it. lol
Kevin Hall said:Whew, that would have taken a while, well thought out, structured ... peaked my interest. It's very brief (doesn't ramble on) for getting the topic across which is the point. Nice one!
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Permalink Reply by Lilith on -
it's not very good...i was listening to lord abortion....idk i was in a sick mood...
Forgive me for hurting you
Your body so liveless in my arms
Your beauty still astounds me
Excited by your charm
I'll be your prince in armor
Our one last goodbye
I'll be your necrophiliac
Thy lips so cold and dry
Love is a illusion
Lust is pure
I hear demonic spirits warning you
The devil's whore
But please don't fret
I'm almost done
We watch the dead and living
Suddenly becoming one
My gift to you
Is precious sin
Forever I've lost you
But death gives me a win
I want to have you to myself
But Heaven wants you so I'm told
Unless I corrupt your body again
And Hell takes over your soul
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Permalink Reply by Kevin Hall on
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Well there you go, usually what seems lame to the writer is usually their best work ... I liked it on one read.
Seems as if I've been saying everything posted is good, fact is they have been (in different ways) lately!
Lilith said:it's not very good...i was listening to lord abortion....idk i was in a sick mood...
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Permalink Reply by Heartsbane on -
I dont know if you can even call this poetry but opinions are appreciated, good or bad
A man whose name was unknown to even him awakes in an ice ridden forest
The man felt nothing but loss and pain but he did not know for what
And so he set off through the thick trees and brush
On one white night of wandering in Winter's Heart
He stumbled upon her across the clearing, pale skinned and dressed in snow
Atop a mare she looked a beauty of legends
She glided toward him, her eyes dancing sapphires
Entranced and enticed the man stood, afixed with love
Their lips locked as one, the two kissed beneath the fabled trees
A shudder suddenly ran through her body and she backed away, clutching her heart
She collapsed in his arms, dead
The beauty's eyes stared and no longer danced with life
Midnight hit the stars and the unnamed man's body was wracked with loss and agony
While weeping into the night, sleep consumed him
A man whose name was unknown to even him awakes in an ice ridden forest
The man felt nothing but loss and pain but he did not know for what...
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Permalink Reply by Kevin Hall on
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Bit abrupt "She collapsed in his arms, dead"
She collapsed in his arms, the coldness of death ... or something?
Just my dumb opinion, but yeah ... interesting I like it :)
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Permalink Reply by Heartsbane on
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i see what you mean... I dont write often cuz i have to have a feel for it at that moment. Its weird. But anyway, its no dumb opinion its A opinion so thank you :]
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Permalink Reply by Vladimyr Blaspheme on
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Suicidal Swansong Part 1 (Succumbed To The Suffering)
By Vladimyr Blaspheme
In life I wait,
Linger in cruel breaths,
Bearing woe ‘til sweet death,
Should arrive to conciliate,
‘Til it should placate my fate…
Born of the scorn of sorrows untold,
I let the throe in,
Invite the undertaker’s grin,
And should demise be so cold,
I am as bold,
As to say to you,
Give to my pallid corpse,
What I never had in life, warmth,
Set me ablaze,
I wish no longer these pitiless days,
Set me free,
And let me fly away as a smoldering haze…
I succumbed to the suffering,
I submitted to surcease,
But I pray that in this,
I may be released,
Don’t trail my path,
For I succumbed to the suffering…
Walk away,
Forget of me,
Live the life that you were given,
And be not disheartened,
Know that in my departure,
My soul was forgiven
Feel not despair,
But know that to me,
Life bludgeoned mercilessly,
And in these burdens I give you this sorry prayer…
“Live on, dearest reader,
Be not saddened, my beloved,
I am not your decider,
Follow me not,
Be not reaped by my misery,
But be your own keeper.”
In life I’ve waited,
Lingered in brutal breaths,
I bore woe ‘til bittersweet death,
That it soon arrived to soothe,
To conciliate my fate…
I succumbed to the suffering,
I submitted to surcease,
But I pray that in this,
I may be released,
Don’t trail my path,
For I succumbed to the suffering…
let me know what any of you think. Good or bad interpretations are gladly welcome. :)
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