In the darkest of hours

 i have came up with a song, now no one can steal it, cause it took me time to make im hoping cradle of filth would turn this into a song but i doubt they even check these things, i will give it to cradle of filth they just will have to notify me if they r gonna work on it cause i already have ideas maybe i could get a friend to video tape me singing it and we will put it on youtube under the titles name, until then enjoy this and please comment
intro:
(screaming)...........................
(screaming).....
The light of the moon shines down apon us
While the wolves of the night howl behind us
verses:
The path we take is a tough one
The path we make is a dark one
This is a journey of a life time
Will you come join me
For it isn't meant for one
Only one can follow
For it would take us to tomorrow!!!!!!
chorus:
In the darkest of hours
We will run and hide
In the darkest of hours
We will become one mind
In the darkest of hours
You shall be mine!!!!!!
Verses:
This is the night
Where we shall fight
until our deaths come to us
We will use our might
For it is the blight!!!!!
Bridge:
(guitar solo for a bit)
(silence) (wispers)
The night we embark
On these trails of darkness
Just me and you
Walk towards our destiny!!!
chorus:
In the darkest of hours
None shall cry
In the darkest of hours
We shall become entwined
In the darkest of hours
We will die!!!!!!!!!!!!
outro:
In the darkest of hours
In the darkest of hours!!!
In the darkest of hours!!!!!!!
You will be mine(holding mine as music fades away)
 

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Permalink Reply by Lord Killerism on June 22, 2011 at 17:48
so this is my first song i will be hoping for comments and if anyone knows how to catch cradle of filths attention so i can offer this to them please let me know i will check my messages everyday
Permalink Reply by Ronald Shortt on July 3, 2011 at 18:17
A bit boring, I don't think Dani would use it. Have you read his lyrics? They are far beyond this.
Permalink Reply by Lord Killerism on July 4, 2011 at 14:17
Like I said first song I made new ones like one called her slit throat, I make these songs in like 5 mins or less really give me any title to work with and I can create it in a song soo yah I can create more
Permalink Reply by Ronald Shortt on July 4, 2011 at 16:36

These lyrics suck why waste more time 

 

Permalink Reply by Lord Killerism on July 5, 2011 at 2:14

FUCK U MAN ITS MY FIRST GOD DAM SONG I WROTE LATE AT NIGHT JUST SHARING IT WITH SOME PPL SOO IF U DONT LIKE IT THEN GO FUCK YOURSELF, what ever man i can post up what ever i want sheesh like i said first fucking song i ever wrote, u dont just start out great man it takes time and effort to actually get good, im posting up her slit throat not under this discussion cause no one ever goes into the spawn of love and war i'll post it in the main one.

Permalink Reply by Raped[of]Faith on July 5, 2011 at 4:27
You say it takes time and effort to create something good, but you also say you wrote this and your other "song" in a short amount of time. How can you get offended when someone says it sucks (he's not wrong, either) when you've said yourself "you don't just start out great". Seriously, chill out.

drew said:

FUCK U MAN ITS MY FIRST GOD DAM SONG I WROTE LATE AT NIGHT JUST SHARING IT WITH SOME PPL SOO IF U DONT LIKE IT THEN GO FUCK YOURSELF, what ever man i can post up what ever i want sheesh like i said first fucking song i ever wrote, u dont just start out great man it takes time and effort to actually get good, im posting up her slit throat not under this discussion cause no one ever goes into the spawn of love and war i'll post it in the main one.

Permalink Reply by Ronald Shortt on July 5, 2011 at 14:00
Yeah and if you plan on being a writer you have to get use to harsh criticism (which I believe you will get a lot of if you take this route.) , people will say far worse things than what I have,  you can't throw a fit every time, or get so offended, I'm just being honest
Permalink Reply by Tina Marie on July 9, 2011 at 15:30
Ahah, I feel bad for you

drew said:

FUCK U MAN ITS MY FIRST GOD DAM SONG I WROTE LATE AT NIGHT JUST SHARING IT WITH SOME PPL SOO IF U DONT LIKE IT THEN GO FUCK YOURSELF, what ever man i can post up what ever i want sheesh like i said first fucking song i ever wrote, u dont just start out great man it takes time and effort to actually get good, im posting up her slit throat not under this discussion cause no one ever goes into the spawn of love and war i'll post it in the main one.

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